kids' writing

Trip To The Nature (by Saket Pattnaik )

 
Photograph of a jungle path disappearing into thick trees and greenery

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Trip To The Nature

BY Saket Pattnaik

The poet’s friend did not know about nature because he lived in the dry deserts. 

What is nature? Poet’s friend asked him in a letter one day.

Nature is very beautiful. In our nature, there are flowers, snow, hills, gardens, jungles, the poet said.

Wow! I want to go there too! Can I come there? When can we go to the jungle? The poet’s friend had many questions.

Oh, I’ll wait for you. Please come and we can go see the nature, said the poet.

Then, the next morning, he went to the poet’s house and he went to his room. But the poet was sleeping.

Wake up! Wake up!

But he did not wake up.  

Then, he said, Have you forgotten that we go to see the nature?

Then, like magic, the poet woke up.

He said, We will go to see the nature. Let’s eat breakfast, then we will pack our things and go.

Let’s go! 

They started walking to the jungle.

What’s this?

Haaaaaa!

What’s this? Shouted the poet’s friend.

That was a lion. Don’t be afraid, said the poet.

After walking for some time through a thick line of trees, in sun and shadows, the poet’s friend said, I want water.

There is no water in this forest, the poet said.

Really? I don’t believe this!

Of course! That is true!

Did you not bring any water?

Hmmm…I think, no. 

How did you forget such an important thing?

Look water! The poet’s friend exclaimed.

You had a mirage. 

No! I did not have a mirage. Let’s go and drink!

The poet said, Oh, I can also see there’s water over there! Let’s go!

But at that spot, an animal was enjoying the water. It was a hippopotamus. They had not seen it before. 

The poet and his friend went near and drank some water. But the puddle was soon dry.

The two friends were happy but the animal wasn’t happy, he was angry.

The animal began following the two, the poet’s friend and the poet. 

The poet said, Look, run fast.

Then it is funny, the animal did not catch the two people. Because suddenly, he felt thirsty and could not run. The two people were safe.

In the end, the poet’s friend said, nature is so good, it gives air, and beautiful trees, so green everywhere. I am so happy coming here.

The End


Saket Pattnaik reads books, loves to travel and plays the piano.

Stepping in a Mud-Puddle (by Sabel Joseph-Etheridge)

 

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Stepping in a Mud-Puddle

By Sabel Joseph-Etheridge

In quarantine, we were allowed to walk outside for two hours, from 4-6 P.M. My mom, my sister, and I were taking a walk when I stepped in a mud puddle. 

Since I didn't want to be bored on the walk, I had brought my headphones and MP3 player along. My headphones kept getting tangled and my socks were too big. I had all these quirky squirms and small problems, but my biggest problem was yet to come. 

It had rained earlier that day and we were expecting more. Our dog, Sandy, kept stopping, wanting to investigate small shrubs and broken pieces in the sidewalk and know what was happening all around her. 

Mom had just helped me fix my headphones and she asked me to hold the bag with water and the closed umbrella. I was not watching where I was going and stepped right into the middle of a giant, round mud puddle. The sidewalk pavement had been dug up or something else that it had a small hole out of nowhere. The rain probably collected mud and water in the hole. 

When I stepped in it my shoes and socks and even my feet sank up to my knees. My shoe filled with dirt and mud water. I was so angry yet sad. I wanted to scream but knew I couldn’t.


When mom stopped to check what happened she saw that I was jaw dropped and struck dead by the drench of water and dirt in my feet. I got out and didn’t know what to do. I started crying. Mom made me look her in the eyes and calmed me down.

 
I realized muddy feet suck but I don’t have to freak out. After that, Mom suggested I sit by the road and remove my shoes and socks before putting my dirty shoes back on. I started walking towards the road but my feet squished. So I needed to fix this. I found a spot to sit but meanwhile, a man was walking towards his car next to where I was going to sit, and since I didn't really want to sit on the road, I looked around and I spotted a big rock, big enough for me to sit on but with ants all around. Nonetheless, I went back, sat on the rock, and took off my shoes and socks then I poured water over them and said I needed something to wipe them with. Mom gave me her mask. I took it and wiped my feet. After that, I put on two plastic bags we brought in case Sandy pooped, and limped back home. When I got home, I washed off my feet and changed into my PJs.
 
It was one of the: 
Easiest yet hardest  
Weirdest   
Adventurous 
Walks I had ever taken. 
 

That night was a blessing in disguise. 


Sabel Joseph-Etheridge is a fifth grader who grew up in Kuwait and recently returned to the United States. She loves to cook and always tries to work really hard and enter her assignments early. Sabel loves her parents, her sister Safyre, her dog Sandy, and books.



Interview: Keira Legge

 
Photo of Little Thoughts Press Magical Winter with a sneak peek of the story Christmas Countdown. Issue cover has a painted winter scene with kids playing in snow and bears drinking cocoa in their den.
 

Keira Legge is 9 years old and in 5th grade. She loves reading. Her favorite books are the Justin Case Series and Case Closed Series. In school, her favorite subject is Social Studies. When she is not in school, she plays softball and karate. Keira loves to travel with her family. They went to Hawaii. That was amazing! Her goal is to go to Australia someday.

Keira’s story, “Christmas Countdown,” is part of Little Thoughts Press Issue One: Magical Winter.


Little Thoughts Press: “Christmas Countdown" has a unique structure where the story is told in small snippets for each day leading up to Christmas. It kind of reminds me of diary entries. Can you tell me about how you decided on this structure for your story? Was there anything specific that inspired you?

Keira Legge: I read a book series called Justin Case by Rachel Vail and it was written in a diary style and I loved reading it so I thought I would write my story in that same style. When I heard the 12 days of Christmas song, the idea of writing a story about the days leading up to Christmas came to me.

Little Thoughts Press: "Christmas Countdown" features a lot of wonderful holiday traditions—decorating, family photos, notes to Santa. What are some of your favorite Christmas traditions?

Keira Legge: I love putting decorations around the house while listening to Christmas music. I also really enjoy driving around with my family looking at all the lights on houses and seeing different light shows. It makes it feel so magical.

Little Thoughts Press: One thing I love about writing stories is being able to imagine experiences that are different from my own, and one thing I find challenging is writing dialogue that sounds natural and realistic when spoken by kids.

What do you enjoy most about writing, and what do you find the most challenging?

Keira Legge: It is fun to create different stories, I love imagining ideas and then being able to bring them to life. It is the best. The most challenging is coming up with ideas and themes. I liked this because I was given the theme of winter which helped me figure out what to write about.

Little Thoughts Press: What are your favorite books, and/or what is the best book you've read recently?

Keira Legge: My favorite books are the Justin Case series by Rachel Vale and the Case Closed Series by Lauren Magaziner. Lauren Magaziner has inspired me to write. I have signed copies of her books and she even wrote me a letter. It was awesome!

I am currently reading The Hunger Games by Suzanne Collins and am loving it.


Little Thoughts Press: What is your favorite thing about winter?

Keira Legge: Playing in the snow with my friends. We have had some big snow storms lately and it has been so much fun building snowmen and having snowball fights.

Little Thoughts Press: What inspired you to start writing and do you have any advice for other young writers?

Keira Legge: Other than Lauren Magaziner, my mom and my teachers have inspired me to write. My mom and I worked on a picture book called The Comfy Spot together, which was published recently. My advice is that anything can be a story, it can be big or small, it can really be anything you want. You just have to write it down.

Little Thoughts Press: Is there anything else you wish I had asked?

Keira Legge: For those that don’t like to write, I want to say that it doesn’t have to be boring. You can write about anything you want, it can be about your family, your favorite game, it can be magical or completely make-believe. There is no end to the possibilities in writing, so just let your imagination go and write it down.

And thank you for having my story be a part of this. It has been such a cool experience. It was awesome to see my story published and with such amazing illustrations.

Snow Up in the Sky (by Henry Austin-Fernald)

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Snow Up in the Sky

BY HENRY AUSTIN-FERNALD

Up in the sky

Sparkles everywhere

Everyone looks

Up at the sky

And the lights went off 

And the moon and the stars brightened up the whole town

And then that was the end




Henry Austin- Fernald is 5 years old and lives in Maine with his little sister and parents. Henry loves when his mom or dad read to him, especially Magic Tree House books or other stories about magical adventure. He also loves playing dressing up, swimming in the ocean, and making backyard forts with his friends.

Henry’s poem “(Hanukkah) Candles” appears in Little Thoughts Press Issue One: Magical Winter.

A Magical Winter (by Issy Mooney)

 

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A Magical Winter

by Issy Mooney

I woke up, the sound of crackling logs making me smile. The buzz of my family arguing about  whether we should have bacon and egg or sausage sandwiches made me laugh a little. I got up,  pulled on my jeans and checked shirt and went into the kitchen. My family seemed to have reached  a decision to have sausage because there were sausages sizzling in a pan in the corner and Lilly (my little sister) was watching the TV over by the sofa. I went over and sat with her and saw that (to no one’s surprise) she was watching Malory Towers, a show that she had become addicted to a few weeks ago.

Mother said “Sausage ok for breakfast? I’ve got some sausages on but I can do bacon if  you want.”  

“Sausage is perfect Mum,” I called back across the kitchen.

I looked out the window and a glorious day was out the window. The snow was coming down in gentle flakes that rested on the lawn and the trees in the forest outside the log cabin we were staying in. I couldn’t wait to get out in the snow and go exploring.  

“Mum,” I called across the kitchen, “Can I text Mollie and see if she wants to go to explore the  woods?”

Mollie is my best friend from school and she had come away on holiday. She was staying in the next cabin along from us. She was there with her little brother and parents. I knew she was just as excited as I was about seeing the woods that surrounded the cabins we were staying in. 

“Sure,” called back Mum. “Just don’t be late back for tea because your father will kill you if you are!” 

I ran back to my room and grabbed my phone. Mollie replied within seconds and soon we both had our boots and coats on and were by the edge of the trees we were about to enter. 

The snow glistened on the trees like powder, the frosty path calling to us as we ran into the woods. 

“It looks magical,” said Mollie “I can’t wait to see what’s there!”.

For some reason the trees seemed  to whisper in a language that I didn’t understand.  

“Can you hear that? The trees seem to be calling to us!” I said to Mollie.  

“ I can hear it too!” replied Mollie, turning back to me. We walked further into the forest, marveling at what we were seeing. It felt like something amazing was going to happen. We walked for what felt like forever when I thought I saw something silver whip out of sight.  

“What was that?” I asked Mollie.  

“I think it was an animal,” replied Mollie, “Let’s see what it is!” 

We walked on, looking around for what we had seen. We only had to search for a few minutes before we found what we had seen before. It was so bright we had to wait for a second for our eyes to adjust. When they did, I saw something I never thought I would see: A unicorn, its silver mane swishing down its neck. Its glossy coat shining in the dancing light of the snow. 

“It’s so beautiful,” I said to Mollie. “I never thought I would see one!”.  

“No one will believe us if we tell them though,” replied Mollie. We both wished we had our phones with us, but we had both left them at the cabins. We approached the unicorn and touched its mane. We both exclaimed in delight. We wished we could take it back to our cabins but we knew that we would have to leave it back in the woods.  

I looked back down at my watch, which I had put on earlier. “We should be getting back to the  cabins! It’s nearly time for tea!” I called over to Mollie.  

“Oh yes we had better be off!” she called back. We stroked the unicorn’s mane in farewell and said  we would return tomorrow (or as soon as we could) and left. We walked back through the forest,  but we didn’t notice where we we going because all we could think about was the glorious sight we had just seen. 

When we got back to our cabins, I saw that my father was putting the dinner on the table.  “You’re just in time,” he said to Mollie and me. “Mollie, your parents have just got here with your  brother.”  

We rushed inside and took off our coats and boots and put on our jumpers and sneakers. The smell  of the cooking tickled our nostrils. We all sat at the table and ate, eating until we felt like we would pop. After we had all finished our food, we (me and Mollie) made hot chocolates and we curled up by the fire for the rest of the evening. We were so cosy that we even forgot to try to convince  everyone that we really had seen a unicorn, but we knew that we would tell everyone in the  morning. All cosy by the fire, everything started to blur and I fell asleep, warm and dry by the fire of our log cabin. 




Isobel Mooney is 12 years old. She has been inspired to start writing by her Aunty Ree, who is writing poetry again after a break. She loves the Harry Potter series of books and anything that has a magical twist to it. Isobel’s poem, “A Christmas Fair,” appears in Little Thoughts Press Issue One: Magical Winter.

The Winter Gosling (by Elijah Pierrou)

 
photo of a gosling. there is a bit of grass on its tiny beak

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The Winter Gosling

By Elijah Pierrou


They were coming. Cracking. Breaking. Opening up to reveal the gosling inside. But then there was a chit-chit…human chatter, advancing, getting closer to mother goose - she ran toward the human. Just then, the first egg opened. The newborn watched as the first living thing she saw was at battle. There was a loud hammer  hitting the primer, and mother did not return. The echo of the gun caused no other eggs to hatch. 

Daydreaming…but it was real. Her mother and siblings were no more.  Her poor little baby eyes and head couldn’t understand. And the only thing she knew how to do was swim and eat berries. This was all life was. Right?  

The tree shapes and the ground were her only landmarks. Exploration was a good thing right? Either way, this goose was to have a bigger map. About an hour later, the little gosling heard a familiar Squawk!  Honk! Quack!

“Run to the pond!,” she thought, but it was another way. The little goose waddled on over to a river she had never seen before. On this particular river, everything was moving: the birds, the  fish, the clouds, and even the water, but the geese were in a big  flock heading in one direction. Last week, when the gosling hatched, the leaves and ground were a whole lot different. Now they were a  yellowish orange. There was a chilled breeze over the mountain forest.  

There were less and less animals in their habitats. She stayed at the river for a few weeks and hung out with the river animals. The owls slept, the stellar jay taught her how to get acorns, the hawk taught the gosling to fish, the mouse told her about winter, hibernation, migration, and the fox taught the young goose how to stay away from  predators - they’re all around. This was going to be a great winter! 

Three months later, December came, and the first snow was upon the forest. The fish were quiet. The acorns were all collected and the mouse’s stories came true. The predators were were gone and owls kept on sleeping.

Our gosling was waddling along to go see what hawks did in the winter (a strange thing to see a winter hawk). She hadn’t been to Hawk’s perch in a few months, too much winter preparation. But then, almost past by the gosling in the snow was a barge of mouse footprints. Mouse was active! On her way to the mouse burrow, the  gosling’s feet were starting to feel the winter cold.  

When the gosling arrived at the mouse hole, she was surprised.  Mouse seemed to have multiplied! One of them, (probably the original  mouse) stepped up and said, “Welcome, young goose,” that was  Mouse’s name for Gosling. “Meet my brothers, my sisters, my first and second cousins, my nephew, my nieces (pant, pant), my Mum, my Dad, their mums and dads, and my great grandfather who goes by Pop.:

Goose blinked twice with her mouth open in awe. 

“Ummmm…” awkwardly croaked the goose, “Nice to meet all of  you!” 

The mice and the goose barely get along. Mouse’s brothers and  sisters were very connected to birds and pulled off stray feathers and put them on their heads as if to pretend to be Robin Hood. The wee ones (the nieces and nephews) made a slide out of the gosling’s neck and upper back and tried to jump the last part. They all needed an extra social skills class except for Pop. The young goose was observing so  she didn’t notice the cheese crumbles she was about to slip on.

Our gosling had always thought that owls just slept. Except for today (to the future, this is just a part of the story). Today the mission was to bravely wake the owls and wreck their sleep—only for today.    

She made her young, annoying, juvenile, immature loud honks directly toward the owls’ nest. The mission was a success! A little owl came out, and said, “Hooo woke us up?” 

“It was me. I woke you up,” said a squeaky voice on the ground. The owl hopped from branch to lower branch until she was face-to-face with the goose.

“Why have yooou woken us up?” said the little owl, gloomily again. 

“Why do owls have to sleep all day?” 

“We doooon’t. And I’ll show you!” The owl hobbled onto a dry  spot on the ground where there was a small twig. 

“Watch,” said the young owl with pride. She put one of her  talons lightly on one side of the twig, and with a violent down press, the stick went flying into the air. The owl caught it with her beak.     

“Tricks,” said the owl happily.

The goose tried a few times, and always missed because of the way her beak was shaped. By the time the goose completed the twig trick, the owl was in her perch.  “Tricks,” thought the gosling. 

The seller jay was trying to find squirrel’s nest to steal acorns - while  goose was at the moose party, the squirrel was blocking Jay’s food and stealing the final acorns for himself. So revenge was strongly believed in the stellar jay nest.  

Meanwhile, the gosling was looking for the stellar jay. She was  practicing flying for next winter. To hangout with the other geese and  fly over the pond, like the other birds. Like the hawk. 

The stellar jay saw Goose. Goose saw the stellar jay. Said the stellar  jay, “You must be cold on the snowy ground.”  

“Yes,” said the goose, “That is what I came here for. Would you be  able to teach me how to fly?” 

The jay was starting to hatch a plan. “Okay. I’ll teach you. We’ll team up  on the squirrel.” 

“Why?” asked the goose. 

“Cause he steals food. Even food he doesn’t eat! So we start now,” said the jay. Let’s go!”


Elijah Pierrou is 11 years old and in the 6th grade. He is homeschooled and has a love for birds and the wild. He also enjoy designing cars, art, drumming, and a newfound hobby: taekwondo. He would definitely go to Italy as soon as the opportunity presented itself.